It’s not “flippantly” - the reviewer’s opinion is there, and the whole message is just a “get your shit together”, but in a more polite and ironical form. It’s not an official or final review yet, but if I would receive it, I’d get the idea of what happens when the paper is officialy submitted.







Check out Beforeigners - there is some prehistoric romance atuff there:
https://www.imdb.com/title/tt8332130/
(and the series are generally interesting)