Grimy@lemmy.world to Two Sentence Horror@sh.itjust.worksEnglish · edit-216 days agoIt never occurred to me that my childhood pets disappearing, or my sleepwalking ceasing the moment my parents finally stopped replacing them, were all connected.message-squaremessage-square36fedilinkarrow-up149arrow-down17file-text
arrow-up142arrow-down1message-squareIt never occurred to me that my childhood pets disappearing, or my sleepwalking ceasing the moment my parents finally stopped replacing them, were all connected.Grimy@lemmy.world to Two Sentence Horror@sh.itjust.worksEnglish · edit-216 days agomessage-square36fedilinkfile-text
At three in the morning, I woke to my wife screaming and only then realized I was hunched over his empty crib.
minus-squareAussiemandeus@aussie.zonelinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up8·16 days ago“Stopping the moment they finally didn’t”? I understand the premiss but that sentence is hard on my brain. Others great work, especially how you upset that other lemming really added to my day haha
minus-squareGrimy@lemmy.worldOPlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up6·edit-216 days agoYa, it was a bit terrible. I did a quick edit but it’s a lot to fit into one sentence and it’s definitely a reach. Thanks! The reaction does make it special, haha
“Stopping the moment they finally didn’t”?
I understand the premiss but that sentence is hard on my brain.
Others great work, especially how you upset that other lemming really added to my day haha
Ya, it was a bit terrible. I did a quick edit but it’s a lot to fit into one sentence and it’s definitely a reach.
Thanks! The reaction does make it special, haha