Die Martin Die@sh.itjust.works to memes@lemmy.world · 4 天前Who?sh.itjust.worksimagemessage-square10fedilinkarrow-up1391arrow-down116
arrow-up1375arrow-down1imageWho?sh.itjust.worksDie Martin Die@sh.itjust.works to memes@lemmy.world · 4 天前message-square10fedilink
minus-squareslaneesh_is_right@lemmy.orglinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up17arrow-down1·4 天前It’s because they tried really hard to make a bad joke work.
minus-squareqarbone@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·edit-22 天前The bones are good but the set up is lacking. It needs to be couple’s therapy, so the wife is in the room. And, while I like the image of him crying but still going to say it, it doesn’t fit with the new setup, so you’d have to change him to being unable to help himself. For brevity, maybe just change the last line to: my wife: …I swear to God, Jon. Don’t.
It’s because they tried really hard to make a bad joke work.
The bones are good but the set up is lacking.
It needs to be couple’s therapy, so the wife is in the room. And, while I like the image of him crying but still going to say it, it doesn’t fit with the new setup, so you’d have to change him to being unable to help himself.
For brevity, maybe just change the last line to: